I like the space in this page! I laughed when I got to the end. At first, I thought maybe the boy was about the squirt Jazz, but it turned out the squirt gun was being held in the bushes behind him.
This is going to be a fun camp for Jazz, I can tell!
Wow, very good comics. I like how you balance the black and white with some greys.
A lot of kids are into manga, but you've really put a lot of work into making your own. After reading page six, I can't wait to read the next page -- that's a sure sign you're getting readers hooked. That's what makes a good comic.
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Katie --
I like the space in this page! I laughed when I got to the end. At first, I thought maybe the boy was about the squirt Jazz, but it turned out the squirt gun was being held in the bushes behind him.
This is going to be a fun camp for Jazz, I can tell!
-- M.
Wow, very good comics. I like how you balance the black and white with some greys.
A lot of kids are into manga, but you've really put a lot of work into making your own. After reading page six, I can't wait to read the next page -- that's a sure sign you're getting readers hooked. That's what makes a good comic.
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